Kevin's 5 fanfic reviews

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I read the fanfic of Crowszero. The Suzuran Senior High School for Boys, nicknamed "The School of Crows", is the poorest achieving, most violent school in the Japan. The students are called "crows" and they band together in factions, battling each other for influence and power. In this facfic, Genji asks Serizawa how to fight to beat Rinda in future. I liked the conversation between these funny guys as this was not preesent in the original story. Original story focuses on the action and friendship of chacracters. However, the writer did not show enough of these. but the stroy was full of wit and humour. I quite liked it.

My name

The genre of this Japanese comic, Hunter X Hunter, is a mixture of adventure and action.  The writer did not write about fighting and action stuff however, the story was interesting enough. The characters from this fanfic are not the main characters and not popular at all. I think using Feitan who is not popular character in HUNTER X HUNTER was quite fresh for me. I liked to read how his name was made. He explained the origin of name very well even it was not from original story.  I also liked interactions between Phinks and Feitan. Their characters are pretty same as in the original story.  

/TheGirlXTheClownXTheMeeting

I read the fanfic of HUNTER X HUNTER. I liked the way of Hisoka (clown) thinking and doing. He is a bad guy in the original story and the writer used his character same in his fanfic.I liked the way of describing character's emotion. I was able to imagine the scene from conversation between the girl and her mother. Familiar and popular character (Hisoka) from the original story makes me easy to understand the story. I also like how the story is progressing at a good pace.


From ZombieLand

This fan fiction story was based on the film “zombieland”. The story is about 4 survivors of zombie apocalypse. Together they take an extended road trip across Southwestern United States in an attempt to find a sanctuary free from zombies. The writer did not put the original characters in fanfic story but, he made new characters instead of original one. He set out with each of character’s detail; name, age and nickname. I like the way of writing the character details and introduction. Well illustrated and structured storyline was enough to interest me.


150 years
I really love to read One piece which is the Japanese manga.
The series begins with the execution of Gold Roger, a man known as the King of the Pirates. However,In this fanfic, the writer made Luffy (main character) as the King of pirates. I really liked that the onepiece was friendship (nakama). Adding story about the future was absolutely brilliant. Furthermore, I love what the writer has done with the Luffy and Shirahoshi. Making them in love was quite fun even they are not a pair of lovers in original story. I also interested to see what the One piece is about. I'd personally like to see more storyline on how their friends doing. The writer writes the story with good flow, which I was able to keep my attention.

If you Jump I will Jump too Chapter 1, a how i met your mother fanfic - FanFiction.Net

If you Jump I will Jump too Chapter 1, a how i met your mother fanfic - FanFiction.Net

I absolutely love How I Met Your Mother and this story is amazing it really shows the intensity between Robin and Barney. For so long Robin has always tried to hide her feelings towards Barney instead she tries to sabotage his relationships or runs away and cries every time Barney talks about sleeping with another girl or when she sees him putting so much effort into getting a girl when hes never put half that effort in their relationship while they were dating. I love this story because Barney finally sees how much Robin truly loves him. I can see this story turning into an episode. Its different from all the other episodes. Great Job!!

Record of the Fallen Vampire fanfic

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7129431/1/Failures

Failure

when I read this fan fiction, I was really intrigued and touched by the story, because I also read the manga from the beginning until the finish on how he sadly died for his people and the world even though the whole was against him, because of what he had done centuries back when he was the ruler of their kind.

And then when I read his work on about the years after the main story it showed some light on the sadness and grief from the main story and made it a happy ending thus it was great reading the short fanfict.


A Moonlight Song for My Love

This short story is about the man named Strauss and his wife Stella in a beautiful country called the Night Monarchy, at first this sets on a young lonely woman sitting by her chair waiting for her husband who is the general of his beloved country thus he is the man with many responsibilities.

He was a vampire with a lot of mysteries but for Stella it didn’t bothered her, she thinks of him as a normal man. As for Stella she is just a normal human girl and doesn’t belong to any loyalty, but it didn’t bother the two, because they soon will have a new member in their family.

This was an interesting fanfict because this relates on the 2 characters from the manga Record of the fallen vampire which I use to read back in Japan, as it’s a beautiful story on how these two just having their normal lifestyles, sipping tea, watering the garden, knitting etc. Thus it was different and interesting approach.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6409735/1/Moonlit_Night_for_my_Love

A New Life

And again another great fanfict, as the story was set on the scene when Strauss and Kayuki were on their final battle, and to be in fact that the main story is that the main character named Strauss lost and died happy in battle.

But this fanfict re-wrote the chain of events that occurred and changed. The one who died in battle was the girl named Kayuki. It was a sad ending

And I also like the part after 100 years after their battle on how their new kingdom is built on the moon to avoid more trouble in the human world. This is a great novel.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6425346/1/A_new_Life

Unpleasant Truths

I really like this story because of these characters Strauss, Stella and Adelhied. This story focuses on romans and jealousy. As this young beautiful woman name Adelheid she belongs in a royal family, perfect and well educated, and also she also love this man named Strauss.

But for Strauss he has an interest in this normal girl named Stella. She was just a village girl and un-educated. As Strauss brought her in to the kingdom during his campaign, as he showed more affection towards Stella than to Adelheid she was frustrated and jealous.

Thus she began to ask herself why and how? And the one simple thing she did was a simple honest smile has caught his heart. This is a great story

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6865398/1/Unpleasant_Truths

The Snow Queen

This is a short fanfic, and this is about the character name Bridget and it focuses on her personality and her sad life from the past on, the pain, rejection, and betrayal.

But to her she never felt any hate about her sufferings as she describes that ‘hate is destructive, hate is blinding, and hate is not the answer to your problems. It was short but it showed her personality

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6370120/1/The_Snow_Queen